First of all, I´d like to tell you that this is my first critique in Deviantart, well, sincerely this photography is wonderful!, I really like the angle of the shot, it allows us to see the model as if we were there! without focusing on the model´s nipple, (honestly it makes the picture to be very sexy), without reaching sexual objetives, dress is simply enough to avoid distractions, we can put attention on the model, I like so much the natural feel of the entire image, colours, and the way in which dress falls, showing us the model´s legs, but with a perfect delimitation. I also like how the Ipod brings good contrast to the picture and the fact of the active screen to make it more colorful, contratulations this is an excelent job!!
Sorry for my english, I´m not english speaker, I tried to explain myself in the best way I could.