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evanescence

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a quiet mountain lake, a distroyed footbridge, and a girl in the rain.
Olivia, on www.girls-mag.de
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is my first critique so.

Lighting - even in the conditions, the lighting still very well done. Not to deep of shadows, but not a lot of overly bright spots. So it doesn't lend to a lot of contrast.

Scene - I like the fact you have water incorporated throughout the entire image, (the rain and the lake.) The broken pier next to the flawless body. Nice contrast.

Coloring - lots of earth tones. I think a bright neon swim suit would not have been a good choice here so i think it was a wise.

Composition - great setup and location. Love the rain, so great timing. I love rain pictures.

Impact is a little low only cause the initial impact is low. It doesn't slap you in the face, which makes it great cause you can keep looking at it and it doesn't loose its impact it slowly increases. (if that makes sence)