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Candy in our sommer photo shoot: "sunray". 94 new pics on www.girls-mag.de [link]
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So, this is my first critique. Don't take it uber seriously.

Great photo. I love how the fact that she's in a shadow with a bright background softly emphasizes her pale skin, but doesn't overpower it. Also, the composition, with the black bit at the bottom right (a seat?) and the coloration really works well with her skin tone and hair color.

There really isn't much negative that I could say, really. The model is gorgeous and the photo really shows us who she really is. The fact that she's wearing such a short top without a bra accentuates her skinny form and is really pleasing to the eye, but doesn't really command all of the attention right off. I'm usually drawn to the face, but in this case I was actually drawn to her belly/waist area.

Overall, great shot. I really love it.
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Absolutely captivating! Lighting suggests a roof-line shadow. "We have arrived. Care to come inside? Cheese grapes and chilled wine sound good?"
Your model is adorable as girl next-door. The costume is provocative yet subdued, reckless-fun with intent. The sweater folded open with only one button suggests her mood. The blues tie well together with her eyes.
Her pose is both defiant and suggestive. "Take a good look."
Her expression playful and daring. "You know how I feel. So you think you can handle this?"
The colors stand out and the grass compliments her eyes and costume. she is breath-taking, fresh and fun!
I can see this as an add for a man's cologne.
Stopped me in my tracks!
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SilentAssass1n Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Which of the 5 sets is this picture from?
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Val-Mont Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Professional Photographer
it´s from "sunray 01 vip"
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SilentAssass1n Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And also thanks for the fast response :D
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SilentAssass1n Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're probably not going to spoil it, but how many of those pics have the blue borero in them? I have set 2 and 5, but since it's so expensive, well, yeh, you can guess it :)
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Wendy010 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
I LOVE that cute little sweater, and she wears it so well!
Darling belly, too!
:-)
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hamundr24 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Student Writer
So beautifully pale, perfect tummy. :)
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BeAware8 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
cute
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SuesseTanja Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Sooooo sweet - why won't the only closed button burst...
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VeryLargeRodent Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
What I instantly notice between this photo and "Candy" and "Cheeky Candy" is her lack of smile.  Her smile really is pretty and really "kicks things up a notch".
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Crouchingbear68 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
She is looking through me.... Damn you Candy... 
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twcmic Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
She has such a natural beauty ;)
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Storvirk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
This photo is a very excellent example of everything coming together at the right time, a very talented photographer, a very beautiful young woman and the beautiful outdoors. All created by the one and only God. God who is perfect and amazing in everything ever done
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Val-Mont Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Professional Photographer
totally agree! The artwork is the girl, not the picture. The pic is only the document of her beauty.
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Storvirk Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Your gift and talent should not be over looked, good sir. Peace
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Raleyks Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Shes gorgeous
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Gizmodizzle Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
I love her shirt!
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cseprem Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
how u get these kind of models?
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seven420 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
The objects in the foreground don't frame the central focus of the image well. Missed opportunity to use that object to point the viewer's eye to what you want the focal point to be. Or even just as a dark contrast. As it is, it is stark against her lovely, pale belly. Distracting a bit.

That said, lovely treatment of the belly and breasts with the sweater. Petty model and lighting is lovely. Hope to see more of her.
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Val-Mont Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
ok, aorry that I bother you with a bad picture of a beautiful girl. Maybe I should visit a workshop to learn how to frame the central focus with foreground objects. Do you want me to stop taking pictures till then?
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SafeGuy Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Photographer
INNOCENCE WITH JUST A TOUCH OF SENSUALITY. BRILLIANT. I ALWAYS ENJOY YOUR WORK.
RESPECTFULLY,
STEVE
SAFEGUY
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RAIS1 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
pretty image :)
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Texapache Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
so innocent and sexy looking
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Tface62 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Great body! and the shirt she's wearing makes her pop out even more! I LOVE HER!!
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Y-D-D-E-T Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Really a fabulous model, with a look, why a man or woman can lose a kingdom
I like her skin clear, must be because I am used to seeing in my country always tanned beach girls.
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Absintheeves Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This would be such a wonderful picture...if it weren't for the chair/headrest! It kills this otherwise wonderful shot! She's GORGEOUS!
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Val-Mont Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
Donīt worry: there are 93 pictures in the set without the headrest ;)
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