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Sunray by Val-Mont Sunray by Val-Mont
Candy in our sommer photo shoot: "sunray". 94 new pics on [link]
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So, this is my first critique. Don't take it uber seriously.

Great photo. I love how the fact that she's in a shadow with a bright background softly emphasizes her pale skin, but doesn't overpower it. Also, the composition, with the black bit at the bottom right (a seat?) and the coloration really works well with her skin tone and hair color.

There really isn't much negative that I could say, really. The model is gorgeous and the photo really shows us who she really is. The fact that she's wearing such a short top without a bra accentuates her skinny form and is really pleasing to the eye, but doesn't really command all of the attention right off. I'm usually drawn to the face, but in this case I was actually drawn to her belly/waist area.

Overall, great shot. I really love it.
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Absolutely captivating! Lighting suggests a roof-line shadow. "We have arrived. Care to come inside? Cheese grapes and chilled wine sound good?"
Your model is adorable as girl next-door. The costume is provocative yet subdued, reckless-fun with intent. The sweater folded open with only one button suggests her mood. The blues tie well together with her eyes.
Her pose is both defiant and suggestive. "Take a good look."
Her expression playful and daring. "You know how I feel. So you think you can handle this?"
The colors stand out and the grass compliments her eyes and costume. she is breath-taking, fresh and fun!
I can see this as an add for a man's cologne.
Stopped me in my tracks!
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SilentAssass1n Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Which of the 5 sets is this picture from?
Val-Mont Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Professional Photographer
it´s from "sunray 01 vip"
SilentAssass1n Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And also thanks for the fast response :D
SilentAssass1n Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're probably not going to spoil it, but how many of those pics have the blue borero in them? I have set 2 and 5, but since it's so expensive, well, yeh, you can guess it :)
Wendy010 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
I LOVE that cute little sweater, and she wears it so well!
Darling belly, too!
hamundr21 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Student Writer
So beautifully pale, perfect tummy. :)
BeAware8 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
SuesseTanja Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Sooooo sweet - why won't the only closed button burst...
VeryLargeRodent Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
What I instantly notice between this photo and "Candy" and "Cheeky Candy" is her lack of smile.  Her smile really is pretty and really "kicks things up a notch".
Crouchingbear68 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
She is looking through me.... Damn you Candy... 
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