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October 8, 2012
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:iconval-mont:
Candy in our sommer photo shoot: "sunray". 94 new pics on www.girls-mag.de [link]
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Absolutely captivating! Lighting suggests a roof-line shadow. "We have arrived. Care to come inside? Cheese grapes and chilled wine sound good?"
Your model is adorable as girl next-door. The costume is provocative yet subdued, reckless-fun with intent. The sweater folded open with only one button suggests her mood. The blues tie well together with her eyes.
Her pose is both defiant and suggestive. "Take a good look."
Her expression playful and daring. "You know how I feel. So you think you can handle this?"
The colors stand out and the grass compliments her eyes and costume. she is breath-taking, fresh and fun!
I can see this as an add for a man's cologne.
Stopped me in my tracks!
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So, this is my first critique. Don't take it uber seriously.

Great photo. I love how the fact that she's in a shadow with a bright background softly emphasizes her pale skin, but doesn't overpower it. Also, the composition, with the black bit at the bottom right (a seat?) and the coloration really works well with her skin tone and hair color.

There really isn't much negative that I could say, really. The model is gorgeous and the photo really shows us who she really is. The fact that she's wearing such a short top without a bra accentuates her skinny form and is really pleasing to the eye, but doesn't really command all of the attention right off. I'm usually drawn to the face, but in this case I was actually drawn to her belly/waist area.

Overall, great shot. I really love it.
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:iconraleyks:
~Raleyks Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Shes gorgeous
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:icongizmodizzle:
I love her shirt!
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:iconcseprem:
how u get these kind of models?
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:iconseven420:
~seven420 Oct 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
The objects in the foreground don't frame the central focus of the image well. Missed opportunity to use that object to point the viewer's eye to what you want the focal point to be. Or even just as a dark contrast. As it is, it is stark against her lovely, pale belly. Distracting a bit.

That said, lovely treatment of the belly and breasts with the sweater. Petty model and lighting is lovely. Hope to see more of her.
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:iconval-mont:
ok, aorry that I bother you with a bad picture of a beautiful girl. Maybe I should visit a workshop to learn how to frame the central focus with foreground objects. Do you want me to stop taking pictures till then?
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*SafeGuy Oct 9, 2012  Student Photographer
INNOCENCE WITH JUST A TOUCH OF SENSUALITY. BRILLIANT. I ALWAYS ENJOY YOUR WORK.
RESPECTFULLY,
STEVE
SAFEGUY
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*RAIS1 Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
pretty image :)
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:icontexapache:
so innocent and sexy looking
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:icontface62:
Great body! and the shirt she's wearing makes her pop out even more! I LOVE HER!!
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:iconted-2013:
Really a fabulous model, with a look, why a man or woman can lose a kingdom
I like her skin clear, must be because I am used to seeing in my country always tanned beach girls.
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